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By : Gevaisa
  • From ANON - Demos on August 30, 2005
    Wow......I step out for a couple of days and 2 more chaptors get added :P

    The storyline is realy developing in leaps and bounds. Nifty. And the insertion of a villian character should spice things up nicely :)


    As to the Honeymoon.......I would think Doom would choose to vacation in his native country. Possibly in some secluded mountain getaway or somesuch. Possibly something put together specificly for the Honeymoon. I seriously doubt he would go to another country for it.

    Anyways a Great Great series thus far.
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  • From ANON - Nat on August 29, 2005
    Hmm.. honeymoon id say somewhere with a little adventure like in the wild but a place that victor owns or has an aquatince with would be neat somewhere close to home but not far away and also you can throw in the F4 to mix things up a bit maybe leadthem somwhere wild or something this is just me rambling keep up the great writing and hope to see another chapter up from you soon :-)
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  • From ANON - Soulshard on August 29, 2005
    *Soulshard drags herself back onto the site* "Must...review...Minion..."

    First of all i really must apologize for my sparse reviews (stupid work gets in the way of my reading time) i promise more in the future.Now on with the review i love the careful in which you are building up to the wedding day, the dress,cake and the jewellery i'm guessing that its going to be a day to remember.As for where to send them on their honeymoon that is difficult i suppose the old favorite Paris would be ok as long as they stayed away from the Riviera or Niagara Falls is quite popular i think.

    P.s Thankyou for the mention, it made me feel special (hugs).
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  • From ANON - Chiyojo on August 29, 2005
    What a cliffhanger!! Thats a pretty unique way to make someone disappear before their wedding day- can't wait to see how Doom manages to figure out she's been 'taken' by 'Malice', that's when Doom isn't so angry (maybe they'll have *really* angry sex if he rescues her? There's nothing more gratious than angry sex!!! XD)
    Anyway, I digress!!
    *ahem*
    You're going to send them on a honeymoon? *thinks* This is a difficult one with a personality like Doom's. I think they'll both settle for somewhere quiet in another part of Europe... but that's no fun!! I agree with the reviewer above- somewhere like New York could end up being a perfect setting for somewhere quite dramatic! What other place could evil villains thrive in besides the Big Apple, even if they are on a honeymoon? ^_~


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  • From ANON - red on August 28, 2005
    I love this story. Doom is one of those tragic characters who needs much and refuses to show it. This entire concept is fantastic (no pun intended) and I cannot wait until the future chapters. I think you should have them have a honeymoon in New York City. That would be very dramatic.
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  • From ANON - beanie_platypus on August 27, 2005
    Again, Impressive! Even the smut reveals more about the stories, and even more about the characters. If only other authors caught onto the idea of 'characterization thru gratuitous nudity'... While the first night was very well written, I couldn't see Jovi really foregoing all initiative in bed, and its nice to see that Doom is not completely dependent on handcuffs to have any fun. I feel very lucky to have stumbled across such a good fic while it was still in the works; usually I come late to the party. Is every day until the wedding going to be covered in as much detail as these last chapters were? Also, any plans for observing the tradition of bride and groom not seeing each other the day before the wedding?
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  • From ANON - Nat on August 25, 2005
    Yea smut chapter :-) i really like the personalities that you are bringing out with victor it is really cute i guess he makes up for the fact of being ticklish with tickling others huh? keep up the wonder work and i hope to see another chapter up from you soon!
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  • From ANON - Demos on August 24, 2005
    It gets better and better. :)

    The story line you are weaving about her is quite intricate, and exceptionally well done. You seem to actually be writing the storyline around Her. A true rarity in adult fanfiction.
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  • From ANON - Chiyojo on August 20, 2005
    Oooohhh! There's nothing nicer than a romantic evening with a certain armoured gentleman!! *glomps Dr. Doom* Especially when he lighten's up in places! This is a *great* lead up to some graphic smut- eagerly awaiting yet another chapter!!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Nat on August 20, 2005
    Hey another great chapter cant wait for the action in the next one love the personalities that are betryed in this one keep up the great work and hope to see another up soon! :-)
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  • From ANON - Katrina Valmor on August 13, 2005
    Hey this is a great fic, I hope you update soon, can't wait to see the big wedding and the wedding night. Your original character is so great, usually writers make original's somewhat boring with no real history, they just seem to be there. Your original has a past and you've done a great job creating her past, and giving her some mystery. Hope you post another chappie soon. I love this fic hope it goes for a long time. :D
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  • From ANON - Nat on August 13, 2005
    Totally awsome chapter I loved the background story it really gives life to the other chapter now... keep up the great writing and hope to see another chapter up from you soon! :-)
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  • From ANON - Beanie_platypus on August 13, 2005
    Yay! This chapter really helps to explain why Jovi was able to just drop off the face of the earth to work for Doom. But with all the press for the wedding and her new high profile status, couldn't she stir up some of her old connections? (I'm thinking her birth mom, in particular. I'd love to hear some of her story.) Jovi doesn't seem to have many relationships outside of "family" and work. Is this deliberate on her part, or just a side effect of her continual scheming and dogged work ethic? Doom is simply spot on in chap 6, even tho he does remain sadly clad at all times. :( His mental process really is very reminicent of Holmes, I agree w/ Jovi there. I *very* much look forward to the revelation of Doom's college escapades that scarred Richards so much. (Pleasepleaseplease let Reed have walked in on something...)
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  • From ANON - Demos on August 12, 2005
    The plot thickens....as it were :)

    Nice bit of background into the main char(not going to try writing the name without a transcript on hand :p) Would I be correct in assuming that her form of genius is based around finding flaws in a given plan? If so thats a rather nifty skill to have, and certainly explains Doom's intrest in her.


    Keep up the good work, and thank you for the shout outs.

    Demos
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  • From ANON - Chiyojo on August 11, 2005
    Yes, we're all looking forward to the next chapters... lots and lots of chapters!! The bit about the surrogate mother was touching- very original! But what I'm REALLY curious about is the part where Sue says that Reed told her (or rather, didn't tell her) things about Doom back in their college days which should make any woman think twice about marrying him... is that simply because he spent too much time inventing machines or for *another* reason?? *raises eyebrows and smiles coyly*

    p.s. Thanks for the shout out- it makes reviewing feel more appreciated!! XD
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