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Reviews for Lessons in life

By : Malcore
  • From ANON - Xander Cruize on February 08, 2015
    Where do I begin, Malcore? I haven't read most of your stories because of blatant spelling errors in the summaries. If you can't get that right... I read this one because I was hopeful that it was a story I'd enjoyed a couple years ago.

    I was right, but I really wish I wasn't. The idea is good, but the execution, the pacing, and the structure all make me cringe. The narrative rambles and goes off on unrelated tangents, the dialogue is stilted and forced, and they talk so often that it detracts from any possible pleasure a story like this offers.

    I won't even get into the Aqua Lad plotline.

    Good day -
    Xander Cruize
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  • From ANON - garsdal on March 18, 2008
    now may that be a lesson, if you peak, you get raped
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on February 23, 2008
    Gods, that's hot
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on December 07, 2007
    when will we get an update?!?!
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on November 10, 2007
    PLEASE update! [makes sad puppy face]
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  • From Mangafreak on November 07, 2007
    woot nice chapter!
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  • From 946036 on November 06, 2007
    Alright then diregard my advice completly and satisfy your need to write your story by a stale old structure.
    I'm done.
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on November 05, 2007
    if only we had pics
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  • From 946036 on October 27, 2007
    Hopefully something new will come out of this.
    I really hope it's not the same old contrived story of Beast Boy being raped by (a)dickgirl(s)...
    I swear I've seen the whole "Beast Boy learns his lesson by being sodomized" plot ad nauseum.
    But, it is your story and you may disregard my remark if you wish.
    Whatever you wish to do, I look foward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on October 27, 2007
    fuck that green bitch up!
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  • From AgentEnvy on October 23, 2007
    Awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Mangafreak on October 22, 2007
    awesome so far
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