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Reviews for Mating Rituals

By : cross64
  • From ANON - Anonymous J on September 10, 2005
    DAMN! That was great fucking stuff. Sorry for the language but damn. BB and starfire got a really hot scene together and the didn't even have to go all the way. Im hoping a future chapter will show them mating instead of "not-mating" though. >:) Although I wont really complain about more not-mating either *snikers*.

    I liked starfire and BB scene alot, but I think raven and robin is what I liked the best. I've always really loved this couple. Birds of a feather ya know. Both dark, mysterios, and secretive. Plus i liked seeing them bond in the trigon season and in 'Haunted' more then all the robin and starfire stuff (though i still kinda like them as a couple i just like Raven better). Its great to finally see someone make a really great lemon with them. Thanks a bunch! If you do take requests like the one in this chapter btw, i'd like to see more of that rubbing against raven stuff. It was really hot and i really like how they couldn't help but do it with all that fixing the machine stuff they needed to get done. Mybe raven can do it while she's in her panties and robin isn't wearing anything...hehe, im pretty perverted aren't i.
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  • From ANON - anonymous J on September 10, 2005
    I just read the first chap and I love it. I like how you made a backstory for starfires mating habits since it really makes you think its for real instead of just being thrown in there to make the sex happen. Awesome work mrrlyn. Im gonna go read the second chapter and see if BB gets his just rewards. >:)

    PS: This is the first time I've read this couple in a story that was a lemon or regular fanfic. You actually made me like this couple when I thought it would never be one that I would like in a million years. I'd expect myself to like cyborg and Raven before I liked this pair. They ACTUALLY work. Go figure.
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  • From ANON - JBChan on September 10, 2005
    Okay that was quite the story so far. Once again your writing skills just knock meh on my lil ol' but. It was so cute. It totally made sense.. (Some AFF stories really make me go.. huh?) The sex was written very well. The characters were TOTALLY in character just like in your other stories I've read. The background the subtle hints at the show, totally getting into the characters heads. Must have been fun thinking like a horny Tamaranean no? Anyway good job you. 10/10 I can't wait to read Robin/Raven. *SQUEALS and then starts doing a crazy jig*
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  • From ANON - Backlash Wave on September 09, 2005
    The BB/Starfire scene was awsome. But hey I love the pairing. Sorry I didn't read the robin/raven part. I kinda, well, I hate robin. I just can't stand the little asshole. Please make more BB/Starfire fics.
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  • From ANON - Constantly Baffled on September 09, 2005
    nicely done, same as last chapter. It was interesting to picture Raven in a skirt, and you pulled it off quite easily. Keep it up, I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Leviticus on September 08, 2005
    Dude that fic rocked I loved it I just wish you had more on bb/star man. i can't wait till star on accident gets so arroused she loses her virginity to him.
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  • From ANON - pacifistattack on September 08, 2005
    WOW! That was really good! STARFIRE is my favorite teen titan , pairing her with BEAST BOY was really good. I really liked the dialogue. The script was true to the characters from how they acted (STARS innocence) to how they spoke. It was very well written. I would have liked to have read some actual intercourse with STARFIRE so I hope you put that in future chapters. Please update/add chapters soon!
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  • From ANON - Scarlet on September 08, 2005
    Wow, that?s really cool and since I love the RaeRob pairing I can?t wait to read more - I?m sure it will be as great as the other chapters
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  • From ANON - AE on September 08, 2005
    That was damn quick of you. I hope you didn't rush since this chapter felt a little more hasty when it came to the pacing and buildup. It was still pretty good though. :)

    I'm looking forward to the "more to come" portion promised in the summary. ;)
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  • From takun on September 07, 2005
    Excellent story, really. Im a BBxrae fan, but you just cant deny an excellent story when you see it, regardless of the coupling, and I really did enjoy this. ^^ Do you take requests?
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  • From ANON - Psychedelic Leviathan on September 06, 2005
    WOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Go Beast Boy!!!
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  • From ANON - Constantly Baffled on September 06, 2005
    Hey! Look at that! It's a Teen Titans story that has a well-conceived plot, excellent grammar, and witty diologue. Most other Teen Titans stories just plain suck, but yours was great. If you keep writing, I'll keep reading.
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  • From BrianChattillon on September 05, 2005
    HOLY SHIT!
    If Raven reads Star's mind she is going to be ONE very jealous woman when she realises just what She's missing out on by ignoring and avioding Beast Boy?

    Damn that was hot and in good taste as well.

    I look forward to Chapter 2 (I maybe a perv but I have SOME morals)
    BrianDarksoul~
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  • From Pndrgn on September 05, 2005
    O My God...twas bloody brilliant! Most impressive! FIne piece of work you have here. Can't wait for the second chapter, if you decide to do a second chapter.
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  • From ANON - AE on September 05, 2005

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