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Reviews for Mating Rituals

By : cross64
  • From ANON - jenner on October 30, 2005
    ahh! more more lemons! LEMONS PLEASE!!!! im gettin tired of jinx and cy. RaeRob or RobStar fucking please!!!!
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  • From ANON - CT on October 30, 2005
    No, that WAS in this story, Anon, but it was taken down and this was put up instead. :D I liked them both
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 30, 2005
    Me again. I am so sorry if this is not you but I think there was one scene where beastboy was a cat and was doing something to Raven? I am not sure and if these perverted thoughts just popped into my head please disregard this message.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 30, 2005
    Did you remake one of your chapters? like chapter 5?
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  • From ANON - KuroKen on October 30, 2005
    Good pacing, interesting angle, creative Jinx&Cyborg setup. While it isn't all that unusual to see the BB/SF or RO/RAE pairings, you went about setting them up in a rather unusual -and deliciously machiavellic- way.
    "Robin was a hypocrite" Is a bold and heavy statement that puts his character on the defendant's chair, pointing out a rather nasty spot on his shiny sparkly armor. I am a bit curious as to why so many authors portray Robin as evil incarnate, this is just an observation, not a criticisim, I wonder if it has something to do with the way that he is portrayed in the series that rubs fanfic writers the wrong way; perhaps because his character comes across as being lacking in some sort of humane aspect the way he obseses about missions or goals or the way he has issues expressing emotion...meh, I dunno any thoughts you have on the matter would be much appreciated.

    Then again I could be wrong, maybe you are setting him up for some sort of redemtion, but it doesn't look that way right now.

    All in all I am enjoying this story greatly and it would seem that you must have a lot more conflict brewing if you keep things progressing the way they are. Look foward to seeing the next update.

    P.S. Mind my asking, but where did you come up with the life expectancy for Tamareneans? Your story is the first I hear of it.

    Thanks.
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  • From ANON - CT on October 30, 2005
    Wow, it's REALLY good. Can't wait for next bit. I did like what you had written before, but I can see why this is easier for you to expand on. Do update soon. I'll just die if you don't. o.o
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  • From ANON - CT on October 29, 2005
    :( You still haven't updated. You must! I'm waiting impatiently...
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  • From ANON - CT on October 13, 2005
    PWEASE put chapter 5 back up and chap. 6, while you're at it! *innocent grin* I love your fic and you cannot do this to me! *cries*
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  • From on October 12, 2005
    ^.^ Doh! Great story so far, makes one smile and really get a deeper feeling of the characters. Keep up the great work. Ciao!
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  • From ANON - Shard on October 11, 2005
    Very well witten, probably one of my favorite Titans fics. I have especially liked the pairing of Star and BB, a rare coupleling that you wrote so well it seemed perfect. Anyway liked chapter 5 hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Fleur on October 11, 2005
    Jinx has been a bad girl. Cy needs to punish her, and punish her he will
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  • From ANON - Whatsaname? on October 11, 2005
    This is, probably, the most well-written TT lemon fanfic around.

    However, the "story" is also decent, but to turn Star and Raven into whores sort of ruins the entire thing for me. Eh.
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  • From ANON - ? on October 03, 2005
    awsomness, keep it up
    w00t w00t!!! I'm rooting for ya!!!
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  • From ANON - Vortexinator on October 01, 2005
    Awesome!
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  • From ANON - Levi on October 01, 2005
    That was a great fic I can't wait though to see Starfires reaction with beastboy. Most likely what will happen is Beastboy will try to hide up his pain and say he's happy for her and Robin and make a joke and walk off making an excuse like going and rushing to his room before Star can catch him (Beasboy is faster than star. Not as strong but faster). Raven most will not talk to robin PERIOD. But whatever happens it is bound to be good. I just hope to see Star seeing she loves bb but who knows.
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