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Reviews for Repayed

By : Comrade
  • From Dancing_Blades on April 14, 2019

    Also mostly vanished. First paragraph remains, the rest is gone.


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  • From ANON - james on September 30, 2005
    its good i only found one little problem with it in the story when robin and star fire are listening you mention that the've gone at it before while later in the fic they act like they've never been together other than the small oversight great fic bb is my Fave char lol only way could be better if they would of gave bb cyborgs brawn somehow lol
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  • From ANON - jozepy on July 02, 2005
    Jozepy like it
    it wasnt to long
    jozepy would like to see more

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  • From BrianChattillon on May 29, 2005
    Read upto chap 3 it was DAMN interesting!
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  • From ANON - drkman on April 27, 2005
    keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Little_Monster on March 03, 2005
    I only read the first chapter of Repayed, and that was the best! A 9 out of 10!

    The other two chapters didn't seem nessesary
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  • From on January 14, 2005
    this was so sweet so good i loved it
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  • From ANON - Nevar on December 19, 2004
    Oh, I forgot to mention;
    NEVER EVER do authors notes in the actual fanfiction, put them at the start or at the end, if they're in the actual story, it distrupts the reading.
    And.. I assume from your vocabulary and descriptive skills that you have read a book before?
    Speech is ALWAYS on a new line.
    Although I don't write for this site in particular (i'm on Fanfiction.net) I still think it write to offer criticism.
    These two reviews weren't flames, because other than the author notes, speech line problems and the whole 'love juice', 'blow-job' and Out Of Character ness, it wasnt bad.
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  • From ANON - Nevar on December 19, 2004
    Arrgh. it isn't bad..but.. I've been reading fanfiction for 7 years and people keep making the same mistakes! Bad teminology and the Magical Regenerating Hard-On. Don't DO it! For Christs sake, try to retain some authenticity.
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  • From on September 15, 2004
    awesome story
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on September 02, 2004
    As if hypersonic's lemons or stories were any good in the first place
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  • From ANON - asdf on August 30, 2004
    Good job. You lemons are getting better than Hypersonicadam2's lemons.
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  • From ANON - Mikel on August 29, 2004
    Hey I'd like you to know. YOUR STORY ROCKS MY SOCKS. It was great. I think your really talented. you should write more BB and Raven.
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  • From ANON - nicole vassell on August 27, 2004
    hey ,
    i really like how you write. so i read your repayed story. and
    i hope you can update it. ok thanks bye
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2004
    The editions were great
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