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Reviews for A Straight Line

By : BobsThalamus
  • From ANON - Jaded on October 18, 2005
    more more more!!
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  • From cross64 on September 13, 2005
    Nicely done. ^_^ Eager to see more in the future.
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  • From ANON - Kenshin-gotenks on August 24, 2005
    Oh my this is great, and you know, you could actually imagine this really happening! Please update soon! I love Raven/Bb!!!
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  • From ANON - Bleach on August 22, 2005
    Love this story, it's really interesting. The shower scene was awkward, uncomfortable, seedy and perfect. Love the Hedwig and the Angry Inch lyric at the beginning.
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  • From ANON - Libra Angel on August 21, 2005
    Oh that was good! Best BBRea fanfic I have ever read! Please keep going. Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Also couldn't Raven heal BB?

    ~Libra Angel~
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  • From ANON - titan guy on August 16, 2005
    that was great make a sequal plz
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  • From ANON - WitchKing on August 16, 2005
    Well done, old bean. The story was a smashing success. I do so love a plot drivin story so much more then mindless lust filled drivle. Keep up the great work. Hope to see more soon.


    So Sayeth...WitchKing ph34r
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  • From ANON - jozepy on August 16, 2005
    it was good
    i like it
    like the ending
    hope you do more soon
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  • From Pndrgn on August 15, 2005
    Dude, you freaking rock!!! That was bloody amazing!!!! O God I can't wait to read more of this! Its just awesome. I love how descriptive you are without changing the characters too much. Sweet!!
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  • From ANON - Takun on August 14, 2005
    That was AWESOME. In character to a point, (I think it probably would take one of them dying to scare the other one into fessing something up) well detailed and an excellent sex scene. You probably wont tell me but.. IS BB gonna die by the end of it all?
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