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Reviews for Motherhood

By : jameswritingfun
  • From ANON - Brian Darksoul(unlogedin) on June 17, 2008
    Yes ikle Robbikins listen to Starfire
    *Snickers immitating Fred and George Weasley of HP famew*

    Good so far damn rollercoaster for BB/Rae though

    Kudos, I am working on a new fic too
    Been a while I know WB is more of a Gizmo than I thoughtZ(Read Whiny little Bitchboy)
    Blessed be Brian the pervert Raven Stalker!
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  • From ANON - aceraven151 on April 07, 2007
    great story!!! let me know when u finish it. u can contact me at www.myspace.com/aceraven151
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  • From ANON - Liana on December 18, 2006
    The story seems like it's going to be good. Do you have a beta? Because you could use some help with your grammar and I would love to help you out if you wanted me too.
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  • From ANON - Neptune on July 08, 2006
    LOL funny as hell I can understand robins complete and utter bewildermint Oh just one thing you call wildabeast antelope thats all you rule. robin I for see your doom and it has tiny feet
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  • From ANON - fleur on December 12, 2005
    wow, if i was Robin i'd be so pissed. in fact, i'm alradt pissed, i don't like kids either, they annoy me. those two devils will turn out like Raven's father.
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  • From ANON - fleur on December 11, 2005
    ...whoa great so far keep it up
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  • From demondragon6 on November 17, 2005
    That was great
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  • From BrianChattillon on November 16, 2005
    God Chapter 7 made me laugh and snort in humor.
    Mwahahahahaha Poor robin he got punked by 2 year olds!
    CLASSIC!!
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  • From lilvior on November 10, 2005
    cool. the teens are sooo grown up! i kno a 19yr-old with a baby and he's useless! I'm surprised Rae doesn't thump BB for his comment about 'the dinner bell ringing'! The babies seem like a right pair of cheeky bastards, i'd like to see them pissing Robin off, *grins evilly* but being complete angels with Star. looking forward to the update!
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  • From ANON - fake_butter on November 04, 2005
    the name junior is awful... name the baby fletcher cuz that is a sexy name!!!!
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  • From ANON - lilvior on November 04, 2005
    aww!! is that the end?!?!? i want to see if the babbies have powers! imagine the tantrums when one kid turns into a vicious little monkey and the other telekinetically tears the room apart! You could do an embarassing breast-feeding scene in the lounge! Although they'd probably hurt you for that...
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  • From BrianChattillon on November 04, 2005
    A good fifth chapter.
    I pity poor starfire if she makes the babies cry or scares therm.
    A majorlly tweeked kid with BB&Raven's abilities is something you definitelly domn't want mad at you....
    Or their parents either......
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  • From ANON - BrianDarksoul(Damn Lazy Comp) on October 29, 2005
    I read Chapter 4
    I agree Short but oh so sweet.
    Who was Cy calling Sweetie? Jinx? Bumblebee? Wonderwoman? Mr Myxlplix?
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  • From BrianChattillon on October 28, 2005
    I have read up to Chapter 3.
    I am intruiged and amused.
    Especially with the little antidodes the TT cast and you have at the end of the chapters
    a nice unique touch
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  • From lilvior on October 27, 2005
    very cute! do you ever write anything that the characters like? lol, i love the way you give their opinions on the stories! i would have thought Raven would be terrified at being pregnant though, but with those strange cravings pregnant women get do you reckon she'll develop a taste for tofu?! No qualms with the plot, but if you polished up the grammer a bit (god i sound like an english teacher!) it would be easier for people to read. Obviously grammer isn't as important as plot though.
    k, luv ya, bye!
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