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  • From ANON - voltron-x on June 05, 2005
    oh and i agree with everyone else terra needs ta dye, but seriously ur an excellent writer never stop.
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  • From ANON - voltron-x on June 05, 2005
    i have ta say i suck at writing but i can tell when its good. you have a rare talent you manage to make your readers feel the charachters emotions. you can manage to make ur readers feel sad for the charachters during their bad times even though they know the charachters arent real. im really lookin forward to ur next chapter.
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  • From on June 03, 2005
    2 Thumbs up.
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  • From ANON - Loneman on June 02, 2005
    Fuckin kickass man. nice addition. for the next chapter, can u make terra die and BB/Rae get it on again. it would be "killer". thanx man.
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  • From ANON - Matt on May 29, 2005
    Write more and keep it up is very interesting.


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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on May 27, 2005
    oooooh shit!
    that was good. i'd give ya a 21-gun salute to the radness, but i might get arrested for "apparently" preparing to kill someone.
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  • From BrianChattillon on May 26, 2005
    I read chapter 15 Damn it was great
    *Waits Paitentlly fort the duo to see who it is*
    Don't mind me I am harmless...........
    *Hides Metal Gear(Yes THAT Metal Gear) Behind his back*
    I swear this is not a big sodding walking Tank that can launch Nukes anywhere in the world, and I swear I was NOT going to use it on Terra!
    *Criosses his fingers behind his back*


    Keep up the good work is all I can say
    BrianDarksoul(The guy that REALLY needs therapy or a shitload of counciling)
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  • From ANON - Jerky on May 26, 2005
    Heartwarmin and kickass. There's nothin I didn't like about this chapter besides tha fact that Terra still lives.
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  • From ANON - s van on May 25, 2005
    Nice! The love scene was very tasteful and well done! A little hurried getting to the Beastboy-gets-Raven part, but overall, very good. 5 stars. Keep it up! ~ess
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  • From ANON - Ashley on May 16, 2005
    So are you gonna use my idea? Oh and how long will it take for you to make the next chapter?
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  • From ANON - Blaze W. on May 16, 2005
    please tell me your going to kill Terra off. Oh that Bitch needs to died a bloody and painful way.
    Oh how I hate her. But you know what they say what gose around comes around. So I know
    that bitch will get whats coming to her and I hope Raven is the one to give it to her! so I hope you
    hurry with the next chapter can't wait to see what happens to her!
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  • From ANON - Loneman on May 15, 2005
    dont let Terra break up BB/Rae. let BB and/or Rae kill or make Terra go away. please continue
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  • From ANON - Meeps on May 14, 2005
    Write more quikly its good!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Angel2005399 on May 13, 2005
    In the next chapter I think you should have Rae and BB Looking in the fake diary and Rae notices that its not her diary. And they finally find the real one and Rae allows BB to read it and its about how they met, their marriage, or sort of like a day to day journal. If you need any help email me at Snowflake21133@yahoo.com and tell me ur comerce that way ill know what its about.
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  • From ANON - Jerky on May 12, 2005
    Dude emotional roller coaster!

    Kill tha blonde bitch!
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