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By : jameswritingfun
  • From ANON - on July 26, 2016

    So cool! I luv this!!


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  • From ANON - Anomlov on August 28, 2011
    I love your fic! It's very different and keeps you wanting to read more. I hope you update again soon, I would love to see what an angry pissed off Raven will do to Clifford once she has the chance ;)
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  • From Zarrthtion on November 06, 2009
    1. sorry for lack of reviews i read kinda fast and by the time i kno it im past at least 3or more chapthers of a fic.
    2. once again your fics have me hooked i can't wait for more your a great writer i just hope u keep writing i plan on reading all your fics as i am now a fan or ur great works
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  • From shadowfiredragon on April 26, 2008
    you can't leave us hanging here, Nos. Raven/BB are my fav. pairing you gotta finish this one
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  • From ANON - Fullmoon.s_wings on August 24, 2007
    OMG WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN TO GAR?!?!?!?!?!? Alright first i would like to say good job on this fic it is so fun to read. Your characters (i know they arent your but the way you write them) are wonderfully emotionally, and they way their thoughts and emotions are described is a pleasure to read. PLEASE update this soon, i REALLY want to know what happens Gar better be alright, arg i really hate cliff he is so bad it makes you want to jump off one! Raven and Gar really deserve a happy ending (i love this pairing btw). Like i said before fantastic job, keep up the great work and PLEASE update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2006
    Please don't abandon this story!!!! It's a fantastic story line, great writing and it's right at the best part. Please keep writing, at least one more chapter to pull it together (though more would be even better).
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on July 22, 2006
    The story isn't bad, but you do need to polish the grammar, spelling, and some minor formatting problems. You're putting caps where not needed, and missing the obvious capitalizations that need done. A few missing commas, and a few where they shouldn't be are the other minor extent of problems. Outside of those technical problems, this is not by any means a bad story. My advice would be to find a good beta reader/editor, then have at with more chapters of this decent storyline.
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  • From ANON - Zabimaru on January 16, 2006
    I think i'm in love all over again. This is one of those fics that is so hard to stop thinking about. Please update soon, always remember that if someone gives you a hard time i'll kill them.
    Ps: Could you start your own religion, i'd be the first convert.
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  • From BrianChattillon on January 10, 2006
    Sharpens a rusty fork's prongs after reading chapter 6*
    Clifford? Hope you have blue cross and had your tetinus shots dude, Cuz i'm jabbing your ass with the Fork of doom mother@#!@@#

    *Everyone's eyes widen at the redheaded psycho*

    nteresting story so far man. I hope cliff rots in HELL tortured by Raven for all eternity
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  • From ANON - nonengel on December 23, 2005
    not quite what i expected from clifford but the fallout from it should be interesting
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  • From ANON - johntheheavy on December 22, 2005
    this gets more awesome by the minute"-"!
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  • From ubermann on December 22, 2005
    i believe that cliff will have a encounter with the beast because you can only push a guy so far.

    it's good keep it up
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  • From ANON - TC on December 22, 2005
    ::evil grin:: I'm not sure which I would like to see more, Raven get ahold of Cliffie, or for Cliffie to get so involved in torturing BB that he forgets to give him the power-nulling shot....
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  • From ubermann on December 20, 2005
    i really now fear for Gar cause if i were cliff i would want his head now neither less before when jelosy was the factor


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  • From ANON - voltron-x on December 19, 2005
    i like the direction this storys goin towards bb/rae is the best pair keep writin
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