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Reviews for You're Hypnotic

By : WindsofChaos
  • From LyeLye on December 19, 2008
    I really didnt like the last chapter, it wasnt mutual at all and seemed rushed. *sigh* Oh well im still going to be checking up on this story anyways.
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  • From doctor on May 13, 2008
    cool, think u could e-mail me when u update?
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  • From orismoris on February 16, 2008
    Finally some BB/Rae smut..haha. Dude, update soon man. I really want to see what happens when Raven wakes...hopefully more of this 'curing of her condition'..lol. Good luck man.
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  • From orismoris on February 16, 2008
    lol....now that was a great chap...I've been there before...congrats to BB on holding back when she is practically tellin ya to fuck her brains out. So many chances I've had and still do. Too many to count...but I wouldn't do that it's a real...what's the word...I guess low. Unless both parties are smashed haha.

    I really like how this story is turning out.
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  • From orismoris on February 15, 2008
    Dude that was hot man. I can't wait for it get even more hotter and heavier.
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  • From orismoris on February 15, 2008
    Nice pace. No rush and really great development.
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  • From orismoris on February 15, 2008
    Good development. I really like how well paced this is.
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  • From orismoris on February 15, 2008
    Hehe interesting indeed
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  • From Pores on November 18, 2007
    Your story was alright until I got to chapters four and five.

    What happened to the width of your text? It looks like you moved the right indent all the way to the right. It is kind of annoying to have to stop reading to move the mouse and scroll to the right to read an entire sentence.

    Could you possibly fix this or is this the style in which you will continue to write this? I hope not I would like to continue reading this. I just want to read the story and not have to work to do it. I know that makes me sound lazy but I really am not. Those chapters are just not reader friendly. Epson Salts
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  • From Omeganian on October 20, 2007
    Nice. as for Robin and Star... Well, maybe you better expand each pair into a chapter.
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  • From Amari on October 13, 2007
    I really like this so far and hope to read more soon.
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  • From Sean on October 11, 2007
    Im a big fan of the Bbx Rae pairing cuase it ike Naru x Hina. But to my point. Your writing style is great and i loved the first scene. I hope you continue....ps i loved Snatch...im guessing that is where the cquote came from right...lol

    ~Dim Song
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  • From jackaniny on September 19, 2007
    Good fic so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From KuroKen on August 26, 2007
    Really like the take you have on their relationship, very close to (show) cannon. I find it particulary engaging that Raven's like for BB is not wholly the making of Control Freak's device, more like said device just helped things along.
    can't wait to see what follows.

    By the way, I see that you are not shy about delving into Robin and Starfire's relationship, are you considering giving them some lemony coverage in this fic?

    again and I stress CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT FOLLOWS
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  • From Ginevrasn on August 20, 2007
    I'm enjoying this one, please post more.
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