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By : darkcupid6
  • From ANON - Valkyrie on February 04, 2005
    *Squeeeeeeeee!!!* That was freakin' awesome! I loved Sibuna's character and the cameos by Walter and Victoria. And the part where Raven's eyes glowed red and she was all, "No she won't, I guaruntee it." and Si was all, 'Okay, that right there, that was hot.' I giggled like an ewok on speed. This fic was so great! You should totally continue with the scene when Raven gets to her room! HEE HEE*perverted giggle*! Just kidding...But seriously. You should. Please consider it! Much love~
    Valkyrie

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2005
    Lol... Chapter 8 was funny. Never wake Raven up. I'm liking Sibuna more with every chapter. He's an awesome character. I can't wait to see what he has in store for his evil, teasing mistress when she gets to the bedroom. Something kinky, perhaps? BTW, I liked the line about the kinky half-demon dominates. ;-)
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  • From ANON - LoveGuardian on January 31, 2005
    And the plot thickens... Awesome chapters (5 and 6). We got to see a little more of Sibuna's powers, but still none of his past. Hopefully soon. It was awesome how he took down Cinderblock and how he pissed off Slade. Until the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - Kill Bill on January 30, 2005
    Hello I thought Raven was in charge here!
    No offense or anyhting, but why is the vampire
    befriending a stuck up little boy named Robin?
    This is still very good, butplease get some
    vampire/Raven connection here. I do admire the
    fact that you update every night with no more than
    two chapters. Cool, well please update very soon.
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  • From ANON - Kill Bill on January 30, 2005
    Aaaahhh, I was right, it was from Hellsing; am I good
    or am I good? This is getting interesting and now you've seem
    to astablish that your a fast writer. Just to tell you before this
    one I read Heart of Ice, but didn't pay attention to the authors
    name; it seems that it's you(Very fast updater, great). Please
    get into the habbit of updating maybe everyday? (Begging with
    offerings).
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  • From ANON - Rave Head on January 29, 2005
    Dude! midgets and hammer? wtf thats very ooc of raven.... besides she is a very powerful half demon sorceress she spends ALL her free time reading and meditating so i think she would be competent in other langueges sheesh come on write her in character
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  • From ANON - LoveGuardian on January 29, 2005
    That was really good. I like that the Titans aren't accepting of Sibuna right away. It's more realistic that way. I loved the part where he fed on Raven. Very hot. I want to know Sibuna's story. Hopefully we'll find out more in the next few chapters. Until Chapter 3!
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  • From ANON - Kill Bill on January 29, 2005
    I must say I was just watched AVP and this just got me in the
    mood for some ancient things. One thing to point out when I
    first read the part where she finds him, it got me to Helling
    with Alucard all chained up reaching out for the blood on the
    floor. Well anyways, please, please(on my knees) update
    quickly!!
    Thank you and goodnight.
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  • From ANON - LoveGuardian on January 29, 2005
    I love it. Anything with vampires in it is great by me, and this is no exception. I'm very interested to see what happens next. Why was he chained up, and how long before there is some romance? Sorry, I'm a big fan of romance. ;-) Update soon!!
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