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Reviews for Becoming an Adult

By : YamisAkuchan
  • From ANON - Jackdaw on April 03, 2005
    Eh. Don't really care. Update Soon
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  • From ANON - Matt on March 31, 2005
    Its really good but dont leave the cliff hanger endings. its exciting keep writing.
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  • From on March 30, 2005
    Oooo, that was evil. Shesh, you do need to update. Damn... when are you updating the next chap? You had better do so soon. Leaving a cliffy like that and not updating? NO nO no, so as you're sis I am going to MAKE SURE you update and give them .... well whatever they want.... hmmm yeah well you'd juss better update soon before I make ya!

    Laterz
    Inus_Kagome_Forever
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  • From ANON - Jackdaw on March 26, 2005
    Please update this on both sites soon
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  • From ANON - wraithschild on March 26, 2005
    this is my favorite lemon series of all time please keep writing.

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  • From ANON - Robin on March 25, 2005
    How could you do something so wicked.Slades more dispicable.Please dont hurt my friend Bb hes had enough of a hard time with these test.
    PLease let Bb and Raven live together happily.Sniff damnit.*Starfire walks in and kisses robin*.
    Murph augh goshta go.Letsh Bb besh happy.
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  • From ANON - LoveGuardian on March 24, 2005
    You are utterly and totally evil. I can't believe Dayner won! It was rigged. He wasn't creative or anything. The stupid judge is so biased. Hmm, I wonder if Dayner will want to stick with Raven, or if he will choose Terra or his old girlfriend (I can't remember her name). Update wuickly to make up for the evil cliffy! Good chapter, by the way.
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on March 21, 2005
    hey, care to tell what the tie-breaker's gonna be or will that be kept secret till next episode.
    i can wait, also, there are alot of people enhacing Terra's bitchy side, i guess nobody likes her.
    anyway, i like how this is going and i know the ending's gonna really be exciting, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Wysteriafox on March 17, 2005
    AHHHHH!!! You have to write more. Actually that was an OK lemon. I'm kinda glad it didn't have too much detail, ya know? Some authors put too much and then it loses it's edge, yada yada. You get it. Lol.
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  • From ANON - WystiFox on March 12, 2005
    Dude, you should have both! Have a gorey battle between Dayner and Beast Boy, in which Dayner dies, and Terra decideds to kill herself because of it! Then Rae and BB can just confess their undying love with a *lemon*. Just a suggestion though, but I vote both! Yay! Lol.
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  • From ANON - asdf on March 09, 2005
    Do a Rob/Star lemon!
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  • From ANON - BeastBoy on March 05, 2005
    C'mon I don't know when U posted the last chapter, but I want the next one
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  • From ANON - wysteriafox on March 04, 2005
    Hey you! Yes you, the one writing this story! You need to finish! For once the story is more than sex, rape, and murder! Lol. Like the storyline and you dipicted BB as the passionate guy he is perfectly.
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  • From ANON - BeastBoy on March 04, 2005
    *Pauses kissing Raven*
    That was great, but I need to stop every once and a while to breathe. Write the next chapter so I can! =)
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  • From ANON - BeastBoy on March 04, 2005
    That was great and I want more soon! Please!
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