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Reviews for Back to Reality, or something like it

By : BlackBird
  • From ANON - LoveGuardian on March 04, 2005
    You updated on my birthday! Yay for presents! Anyways, good chapter. I was confused at first, until I realized that Garlo dying was a dream. I'm glad that Garlo knows now that Raleen is really Raven. They are very daring to try to kill Queen Raven. Is this story going to end soon? I don't want it to, but it seems to have that feel to it. Update soon! Have a good day!
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  • From ANON - Aloe on February 20, 2005
    Wow, what a great story. Can't wait to see where you'll go with it.
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  • From ANON - Montage on February 16, 2005
    Awesome fic...write more, please! :)
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  • From KuroKen on February 12, 2005
    Nice chapter, direct and to the point. Thanks for the lemon, we were needing substenance. I see the mystery of Queen Raven grows synister. What of Terra?

    Oh and one thing, the whole "something bad was going to happen" thing...BAD GARLO! BAD BAD GARLO!
    talk about a heartless cliffhanger.

    Now back to your cave and don't come out until you are sorry...or have the next installment or two ready.
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  • From ANON - Soldier of Darkness on February 11, 2005
    Beautiful love scene, IMO. Haven't seen many love scenes like that aren't just...too much. Very well done. Bravi. ^_^ Ooh, what's going to happen?? Update, please!
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  • From ANON - catt on February 11, 2005
    OOOOOOOOOO ME LIKEY!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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  • From ANON - LoveGuardian on February 10, 2005
    Ahhh! You can't end a love scene with a cliffhanger! You are evil. That was an awesome chapter, though. The contest was funny, and it was great that it ended in a tie. More fun that they both got to request. I'm glad that Garlo actually let his guard down for once. Though, now that I think about it, he's probably going to blame his giving in to Raleen/Raven for whatever just happened. This is one of my favorite stories right now, so keep up the awesome work. Update soon.

    LoveGuardian

    P.S. No leash here! LOL
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  • From ANON - AmberCookie on February 08, 2005
    Just wanting to say great story, totally love it. I can't wait until the older/different beastboy finds out the true raven, how this will end up and stuff!!! Update soon!!!!^_^
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  • From ANON - Angel on February 08, 2005
    I loved it, really cool, awesome!!!!! Please update!!!
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  • From ANON - .... on February 08, 2005
    interesting story. You really need to update it.
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  • From KuroKen on February 08, 2005
    This, is the best alternative history in the history of alternative histories! ...um, yeah.
    I mean seriously! The size of your massive cojones is only dwarfed by their shiny brassiness.
    I have nothing but respect for the structure and scope of this piece.

    Superb use of canon for new interpretation of accepted lore, the character developement of both Raven and Garlo and
    to a less obvious degree Vic. As a fan of the series I've always felt that Beast Boy has always had within him the potential
    for greatness, that his humor is both a defense mechanism and the means by which he seeks acceptance. You have forced
    him to grow up and take command, he is still the guy we know...somewhere in there. The level of angst you've inbued him with
    rivals anything I've ever seen in Batman:TAS or Batman:Beyond.

    Then there's Raven -and let's face it, I am sure we all want to see what the Queen is like- she is so much herself, yet not
    you've allowed us to peek in to her journey into emotional freedom and self-discovery. It is utterly charming, but not on an
    afterschool special sort of way. I like how her newfound freedom has allowed her to examine her feelings towards herself, Garlo
    and those towards her other friends (who are now her enemies?). Will there be any redemption for the other ex-Titans?

    Very creative in developing an alternative manifestation for her powers. By the way, since you have Garlo wearing a mask with
    the effigy of his lycantrope self, along with popping pills...Does that mean we will eventually be graced with "The Beast Within"?
    Have you considered getting Vic to build himself another full borg body? Smacks of Ghost In The Shell, I know but it seems that
    Garlo and Raven will be needing all the help they can get.

    Whew. Ok sorry, I got carried away there, as you can tell I am really liking this.

    Now hurry up and update!
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  • From ANON - Wrathchylde on February 07, 2005
    Damned good story going here. I like the character development and your style isn't too bad either. Keep up with it.
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  • From ANON - Soldier of Darkness on February 07, 2005
    Still very much enjoying this fic. I wonder what Garlo's reaction will be once he finds out who 'Raleen' really is.
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  • From ANON - LoveGuardian on February 07, 2005
    Here I am, reviewing again right away. Nice job on the history of the war, and of the explination of the mask. I loved Raven's last line, "You're a hero without it." So there, Garlo. Hope the mission goes well. Perhaps a "celebreation" will be in order when they win?
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  • From KuroKen on February 06, 2005
    Very creative and original premise. I like your character interpretation,
    different but still close to the source.

    Please update soon. We all want to know where this is going.
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