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Reviews for It Ain't Just a River in Egypt

By : nancyb
  • From Mamacita on December 18, 2015
    fantastic story! i'm not really a justice league fan, i'm here through working on AFF's archive cleanup...but i got hooked on the first chapter and had to read the whole thing through. wow, you did an amazing job. the ending is perfection. nicely done!
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  • From Noctivagus on December 31, 2006
    This was a powerful story, intricate and moving. To think out of all the JLU episodes I've seen, this was the one I missed, but your story brought it to life for me in a way just seeing it on screen probably wouldn't. The world and circumstances you built lived and breathed, and I felt for everyone involved - yeah, even Hath-Set. By the way, emphasizing that he wanted to be with the king himself? Lovely. And the new child on top of everything...it was a great climax. I definitely enjoyed this.
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  • From ANON - Dudatude on November 20, 2006
    like the pervious reviewer i to would like to see a story like that l
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    Please?
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  • From ANON - DollFaceKILLA on November 20, 2006
    I loved this story and i would like to see another one just like it, by that i mean using the same time period, maybe a longer story that goes into detail, about how the "gods" crash landed on the earth and how Bashari eventually got status general
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  • From ANON - DollFaceKILLA on November 20, 2006
    I thought that this chapter had a lot of twists, i know in the cartoon that they were both poisoned, but part of kept thinking that they would escape, and while they would'nt have a happy ending, Katar would go searching for them and would eventually find their home and children, and in a blind rage kills them all, except for their children
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  • From ANON - DollFaceKILLA on November 20, 2006
    i really loved this chapter and the small implements of BDSM, i kinda wish that it could have been taken a step further, with the inclusion of the "experement" i still enjoyed this chapter and loved the FemDom
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  • From ANON - DollFaceKILLA on November 20, 2006
    I really like how real this story feels, its like i'm in a time warp.....or something like that.......wow!
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  • From ANON - DollFaceKILLA on November 20, 2006
    its me again, but when you love a story this much, its only proper to go through and review every chapter.
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  • From ANON - DollFaceKILLA on November 20, 2006
    This is by far the best GL/HG fiction that i may have ever read!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - msfatbooty on May 08, 2006
    This is an interesting pov of how the those two died. Love the story, love how imaginations took it in a different direction. Ur a pretty good writer, I'm definitely lookin forward to more of your stuff. :)
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  • From ANON - Tasha on April 29, 2006
    Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter. How many are there gonna be anyway. Email me and let me know. finebyfive314@yahoo.com Thanks
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 22, 2006
    This is one of the best justice leauge sotries I've ever read. I greatly hope you continue with this story and don't forget this wonderful jewl of a story.
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