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Reviews for Torn

By : AnuKat
  • From brainfear on February 20, 2009
    Thanks for letting us know! A lot of authors don't even do that at least.

    Great story! Verra juicy!
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  • From Recordkeeper on February 03, 2009
    man. i really liked this story too. cant you just tell us what you wanted to happen in the end and we can fill in the blanks by ourselves? at least tell us why the medallion is there. please?
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  • From laloga13 on January 12, 2009
    Though I greatly enjoyed this story, I was a little confused as to the character Anu, and how she and Shredder fit into the world that you created. You pulled me into the story immediately, which was great, but also left me uncertain about some plot points.

    The descriptions that you gave were wonderfully vivid-it was cool that you made Shredder have a koi pond!-and gave us a great insight into Oroku Saki's character. Some of the paragraphs were too "blocky," though, and the story as a whole could have benefited from breaking them up into smaller, more "readable" chunks.

    Overall, this was a very, ahem, entertaining read. I look forward to your future endeavors-possibly more Egyptian-themed stuff?
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  • From agent2919 on February 04, 2007
    Loved it! are you going to add more?
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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on June 09, 2006
    Hi Anukat,

    Finally you update your incredible story, you naughty girl! Oh, how long I have waited for Saki and Anu to...ahem...have their honeymoon...hehe.

    And oh, what a honeymoon it was!!!

    =Fans herself and faints=

    Funny parts too.

    "Anu started watching a cartoon." Gee. What cartoon was that, hmm? =LOL=


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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on July 17, 2005
    I also loved the Get your dildos ready part!

    =LOLLOLLOL=

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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on July 17, 2005
    O_O
    From one Shredder lover to another:
    Oh Anu! U R BAD!!!
    Here I have awaited for them to make love for so long...
    then FINALLY...
    oooooo, it was goooddd...
    and then...
    AND THEN...!!!
    Now it's his turn?!
    Ooooooooo!!!
    Also, the "Wrong hole!' part was hilarious, and oh, how often that happens with lovers.
    Where is a beanie baby so I can shmack you upside the head with it, heheh?
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  • From Spleef on July 12, 2005
    Aw, not another cliffie. But damn rhis chapter was so good...
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  • From Kash on July 11, 2005
    Woohoo!At last!New chap!!this is a great story with some really good original characters.This was a steamy chapter with a nice cliffhanger too....more please:)
    ......now for that cold shower.....
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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on July 01, 2005
    Hi Ms. Anu,
    Dearest, why have you yet to update this sublime story? Your fans like me (well, primarily of your female character's and Shredder's) are dying! :(
    WHEN ARE THEY GONNA GET IT ON?! Foreplay is nice and all, but WE WANT NOOKIE. NOOOOKIIIIIEEEEE. :P
    Hmm, suddenly I crave milk and cookies, hehe.
    PS, feel free to read my latest stories, Demons Around Her and Bad Kitty. I would greatly appreciate your comments. If not, thats fine.
    Lates.
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  • From Kash on June 23, 2005
    i love this story!!!want to know more about Anu!and the spicy sex too........wow!great story!
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  • From RMW on April 25, 2005
    Hello dear Miss Anu,
    Ummm...not to pressure you or anything...but...is Shredder gonna keep on being such a tease?! Sheesh. Even he's starting to frustrate me. =LOL= Take care.
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  • From Spleef on April 22, 2005
    This story rocks. I simply love it. The cliffhanger was so cruel. you MUST write more or i shall send my vicious rabid pet showabi after you!
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  • From RMW on April 22, 2005
    !_! Miss Anu, you are so mean. Chapter 7 was awesome. ARROUSING, hehe. Shredder is such a bloody tease. And ooo, so gentle at the oddest moments, and in odd ways. Again, I learned something. Hehe. =Blushes= Lemme guess...making love with Saki Oroku takes several hours to a whole week? Hehe. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on April 06, 2005
    Hello,
    oooooooooooo...I so want Shredder too. This story teased me, left me wanting, much like Shredder with Anu. Sheesh. You did that on purpose, huh? :P Anyways, keep up the excellent work. A fan.
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