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Reviews for Head Games - Batgirl

By : TentacleFan
  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2016

    Would love to see a second part of this with fucking.


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  • From red09 on October 12, 2015
    Great story. Think you can do a similar one with Olivia Benson from Law and Order SVU?
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  • From BlueArrow on July 31, 2015
    I'm not sure what I enjoyed more, the head giving or that you wrote a black character proper English. Either way I thoroughly enjoyed this piece.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 30, 2015
    Hm, continue?
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  • From ninesenshi on July 30, 2015
    Good to see you writing. This was pretty good. Really hoping for an update to your Whoring the Debt or Ronso stories.
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  • From ANON - Ragnarok on July 29, 2015
    Thoroughly enjoyed the fiction. You describe things pretty well, from actions to what goes on in the male lead's head, but Barbara, I think, could use some more depth, unless all you want is her to get to it. If that is the case, I think more interesting would be to keep away from her thoughts, and just focus on Batgirl suddenly going crazy for BBC.

    I would enjoy to see Barbara falling further, being tagged along for neighborhood parties to be shared, being used to pay off debts, adapting and spiraling down a new lifestyle because of her lack of self control.

    Whatever you decide to write about, though, I will be reading! Your stories are amazing.

    Kudos,

    Ragnarok.
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  • From Ice13 on July 29, 2015
    Fantastic! A sequel could be fun, with him slowly corrupting her...
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