Reviews for The Twelve Labours of Wonder Woman

BY : Ksennin


  • From Charles_de_Mercania on May 01, 2016

    The first three Labors and four chapters are well written a few errors with homophones and near homophonic words. It is the sort of thing that spell checking can't catch. I hope you continue the story and finish describing the other nine. They don't all have to involve sexual unions, but I see how well you fit those into the theme of the story and congratulate you on making it and integral and necessary part of Diana's successes and growth as a person and an Amazon.

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  • From Gautsu on May 12, 2014

    Part 3 with Pegasus awesome. Please finish. When I think of the other possible labors from mythology ( the boar, stables, bull, hydra, Geryon, Atlas, Ladon, Cerberus) I get excited by the posibilites

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  • From dadragon1 on May 11, 2014

    Long time fan, first time reviewer. Made an account here to review your story.

    I like your dialog, it's funny and feels like the different characters, sometimes it's confusing who's talking, but only occasionally.

    I like how you have different encounters in just about every story, I can't wait to see how the story continues.

    5 stars!

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  • From Oric13 on April 17, 2014

    Excellent story! And very well written (you're like best at writing Wonder Woman in-character).

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  • From ANON - iwright on April 17, 2014

    Both stories are good, however there needs to a wonder woman/ cheetah pairing. After all they are the worst of enemies.

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  • From ANON - Vorpal on April 16, 2014

    I remember this story. Can't remember what site I read it on before, but I had assumed it had been abandoned. I'll be really glad to see the story continued here.

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  • From Ragnarok on April 15, 2014

    Okay.

    I really like the premise! I really like it. The Gods have always been petty, horny and downright caricatures of our worst flaws, so the depictions of Aphrodite and Zeus are great, and him talking about Diana worshiping him is very cool. The premise is both very enticing AND it makes sense thematically, which I like a lot!

    I also liked Diana bringing up the animal forms, and she was more willing to go through that than to just... get down to it. Diana as a whole was very interesting. She didn't seem too bullheaded, but headstrong enough to feel like she is a true, legitimate heroine.

    Now, first things I would change!

    The Gods (and I don't know Wonder Woman's gods in the comics) feel like they are too human. Aside from Zeus, Athena and Aphrodite, some of them seemed to modern (Artemis and Hermes especially bugged me).

    Other than that, and the format (why not write continuously?) I really like it and I hope to see more of this fic!

    Now on my waiting list =)

    Go go go!

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