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Reviews for A Night to Remember

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  • From ANON - SailorNemesis on April 30, 2013
    Sexy futa love!
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  • From ANON - SailorNemesis on April 30, 2013
    Read Chap 3. More good stuff. I could read for you if you need some help.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From ANON - juse on April 26, 2013
    should bring in Gar. You know to teach him about the birds and the bees
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  • From redsliver on April 26, 2013
    Another excellent chapter. I am very happy to see more Young Justice work.

    It flows well, the sex is good and not hurried. There are a few spelling errors, nothing a good beta reader couldn't help you iron out. I did notice that you consistently write 'heard' as 'herd'. I screw up homonyms all the time, so I offer my sympathy, but this one you seemed to make every single time.

    In all honesty, this is a very good story and I am excited for the next instalment.
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  • From ANON - SailorNemesis on April 14, 2013
    Really enjoyed chap 2. Hope to see more.

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  • From ANON - SexyLizard on April 09, 2013
    I like it, please continue.

    Shapeshifting characters open up all sorts of interesting possibilities.
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  • From redsliver on April 06, 2013
    Ah a continuation of a cancelled Greg Weisman series... Genius.

    This is well written and a great point to continue Young Justice. I really like your Artemis, but she could use a bit more snarkiness. (Which I suspect would be more apt in a second chapter.) This is a well written fic, Young Justice definitely needs more het and femslash fics.

    You vacillate between present tense and past tense all throughout your story. I suggest you pick one tense and stick with it and I plead that you pick past tense (which is just easier to read). There're several homophone errors (which I notice because I fuck them up pretty badly myself) but a good Beta Reader would solve that problem pretty quickly.

    This is your first fic? Well done. I hope you keep writing and keep improving, it's worth it.
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