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Reviews for Girls' Night Out --(Part 2)

By : Riot Storm
  • From ANON - WildeChild on October 10, 2008
    Another great story — but this time let's see the girls have complete victory.
    Also would like to see Celeste heap a bit more humiliation on Clark at work. I thought that was a great plot development and brought something new to the story. I was hoping it might run a bit longer. Any chance?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 08, 2008
    I refuse to comment on chapter 14 until I get more more more..... without more more more I can't sleep thinking of the devilish things Alex & Kara (along with the rest of the devastating femmes) are gonna do to the un-super men in this story....
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 15, 2008
    Superman, I've going to give you some advise. The next time you see these bitches yapping about how they're going to beat you and have no clear protection, use your heat vision and decapitate them. What? You don't kill people? Okay, how about fighting dirty? You don't that do either? Wow. You suck.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 14, 2008
    You are most welcome for the picture..I will try to find others that may be appropriate to the story. Your writing is truly as superior as these evil women and I love it. If I can make one small request.... do not torture us with sooooooooo much time between updates. We need more more more!!!! And one can only imagine what these new power women in charge will do next.

    Continue to cut them loose as you did in Chp 13... and we'll all be surrendering to them.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2008
    here's your kara picture for inspiration

    http://bp0.blogger.com/_R2JkQ5gNWoE/SGHqXEuNM0I/AAAAAAAABD4/hnkc-P9f2HQ/s1600-h/DarkSupergirl_DBColors.jpg

    i'd surrender to her in a sec
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2008
    let your most creative juices flow for the last chapters... the humiliation is the easy part, it's already happening. But it's time for a new order of power goddesses especially ones that can rule the world...alex, kara, lasso girl in her new costume, celeste...let the powers come together and truly rule and take everything that they desire.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2008
    where is the update...it's time for alexandra unbridled ..draining ..absorbing ...growing muscle....and taking the very life essence from these helpless men...
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2008
    oh great...just great....no updates for almost 2 months. do you do this deliberately? make us hunger for more and then leave us hanging. c'mon give us more. you are a talent in writing. share it!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 16, 2008
    i feel myself succumbing to alexandra's power...willingly...hoping for her to keep the powers she's draining...alex & kara...the true superior team for the new millenium...more more more
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2008
    I'm begging...my blood pressure elevated...cold sweats...other things I just can't mention. More more more, soon soon soon. Please!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2008
    This is better? Now I've gone from drooling to double drooling waiting for even more more more. Please, if I have to wait another 3 months I may have to go into cardiac care.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2008
    How long do we have to wait, drool and go crazy until new chapters are up???? C'mon...show some mercy on your fans.
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  • From ANON - adjourny on February 09, 2008
    Oh god, that was hot.

    How about the villains kidnapp Lois and then have sex with Clark in front of her, or the other way around, or both.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2007
    every chapter is making theses goddesses sexier and more powerful..I'm having trouble resisting just as a reader. Where I always want more more more...it's getting to the point where I CRAVE more more more...keep it going!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2007
    Now it's heating up...the goddesses seem unstoppable and soooo hot....more more more please don't keep us hanging too long
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