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Reviews for Girls' Night Out --(Part 2)

By : Riot Storm
  • From ANON - mindy on July 23, 2012
    Brilliant absolutely brilliant. Been on this site for just a few months and have to say this is one of the best adult fanfics Ive read. DO please carry on with this riot-storm. cant wait to see what you do about corrupting dear Lois lane. and the other heroes. Thanks again
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  • From ANON - Angelalex242 on February 24, 2011
    They really don't learn, do they? If they had any sense at all, they would've brought Wonder Woman and Power Girl with them. All the power, none of the male weaknesses. But, that's just my logical train of thought.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2010
    Loved the story, both actually - had been hoping for a full on Supergirl/Superman scene with all the teasing though.
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  • From Pugugly001 on October 14, 2009
    I am not typically into the kind of hard 'man-breaking' femdom Riotstorm writes, but he does such a damn good job with it, and with keeping the characters personalities intact rather than parodying them - just great.
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  • From ANON - Riot Storm Admirer on July 28, 2009
    Just amazing...each chapter provides better and even more creative writing. It leaves one with only one possible reaction: to crave more, more more. Don't stop. Stay inspired. Your gift in creative writing truly overwhelms.
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  • From ANON - Riot Storm Admirer on July 17, 2009
    Ok... you've got me sitting on the edge of my seat. Can't wait to see these goddesses triumph. More, more more. Looking forward to reading more of your talented writing.
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  • From ANON - Riot Storm Admirer on May 30, 2009
    Oh yeah...in case you needed to hear this again...more...More...MORE!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Riot Storm Admirer on May 19, 2009
    Now were cookin! How about some more dark Supergirl images for inspiration:

    http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/8118/josephmackiedarksupergirlcolorra2.jpg

    http://www.enchantedelysia.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/12/es2.jpg

    http://media.comicvine.com/uploads/0/1494/86396-767-supergirl_super.jpg

    http://www.phonethemepark.com/wp-content/uploads/image/evil_Supergirl_iphone_wallpaper.jpg

    Stay inspired!!!!!


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  • From ANON - anonymous on May 18, 2009
    Great chapter really. Now I really want to see what happens in the next one with Tangle as she's my favorite of the female villains. Here's to hoping that she'll get to ride Kal hard until he screams her name.

    A little from Lois' point of view would be appreciated as well.

    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2009
    what a copout!....listen to the violins cause you're burnt out. You ignore your gift. You are an entertainer and your stories are better than anyone's published here. Quit the whining and get busy! The economy sucks, life sucks and we're all holding on to bits of hope and glimmer to keep us going. If you're burnt, ask for input but don't quit. There's enough crap in 2009 for all of us, we need bright lights like your writing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2009
    Uh..hello??? Remember us? Your loyal readers! Could you please get around to Chap. 18 in this lifetime? Begging for more more more hasn't seemed to do the trick. OK..then we can discuss terms of surrender to Alexandra if you post it one of these decades.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 28, 2009
    awesome...don't let it end. so the justice league is coming...let the women of JL join the fun...more more more
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2008
    Nice the way you worked in Dark Supergirl's new costume and look from the illustration I sent you several chapters ago (I'm honored). The story is devastatingly good and your writing is on a level not attained by most of the other authors who write here. Don't cut it short, don't "wrap it up" too soon and please please please post more frequently. You have a gift and at least from this reader's view, I am grateful that you share that gift with us. I can't wait for Chp. 17 (Pt. 2) and then even MORE MORE MORE........
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2008
    c'mon...where's chap. 16...2nd pleading request....
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2008
    Now the fun begins...ole supes is the sucker once again and with double the power he normally has..now that Alex can feed through the busted armor, she is going to become the goddess we all want her to be. And then the un-super men have no choice but to know that goddesses rule. More more more....Alex, Kara & the other goddess femmes rule! Now that no one will be able to stop them, next they should take over the government. Certainly would be an improvement to the morons running it now.
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