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Reviews for Forbidden Fruit

By : GrayerGray
  • From ANON - HighPricedHitMan on December 15, 2005
    Not bad, Miss Connor. Not bad at all. There are a few typos, and the chapters are short, but it's still pretty good. I say seven out of ten. However, let me say this. I think you got the punisher's character all wrong. Frank Castle does not go out picking up strangers in a bar. He does not find himself distracted by uncontrollable lust for a woman. Frank Castle is obsessed in a way that no other comic book character is. His only thought, EVER, is how to best find and kill his enemies. However, I did not take that into consideration in my review, because if you were to stay true to his character you’d never write an adult fic about him. So yeah, not bad. Surprised no one else has reviewed. By the way, do you think you could check out my fic, Contract Lover, under Original: Erotica/Sex? I do believe its main character might bring back memories for you ;)
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