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Reviews for To Wake Beside You

By : NecroRebel
  • From ANON - BlackLeather on September 18, 2005
    That is one of the GREATEST stories I have ever read!5 STARS;)
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  • From ANON - MadMagnum on August 02, 2005
    That was awsome, I love the ending you gave it, it was perfect.
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  • From ANON - Jeff on July 07, 2005
    Absolutely AWESOME story. I love how you repeated the first paragraphs followed by "Just like every time before." It really added something special when it finally deviated. You really and truely are a great author. Keep the stories coming!!
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  • From ANON - jozepy on July 04, 2005
    jozepy like it
    but it did kind of run off for abit
    but it was still good
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  • From ANON - RavenGothGirl on March 29, 2005
    Wow. When i talk to my friend, i tell her that some of these stories are so beautiful that you don't usually find in real life, she just laughs. She says that the person who wrote this is perverted, well actually its a beautiful thing and you keep it that way. Great now I'm all emotional. Still great job, but you shouldn't have repeated the sex part twice. just too much i mean we already read that part. Good Job!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on March 25, 2005
    that's some present you wrote to BB
    lucky beast.
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  • From ANON - reenie_69 on February 04, 2005
    dude, this was awesome! BB and Raven go really well together! I love it!
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  • From KuroKen on January 15, 2005
    I like it, being brief and a little sad at times, clever use of repetition to create for the reader the idea of a never ending circular dream. I have one or two things to knitpick at but that's besides the point, for a shorter story like this the pacing and development is apropiate; Although I think that it would be unnecessarily cruel/elaborate on Raven's part to tease BB for a whole 3 bloody years...(that evil witch! just kidding) I would've found it more endearing if the dreams for the last 3 years would have been a shared subconcious experience, then used some form of Deux Ex Machina to bring the action to fruition.
    It is still very sweet that they said their "I love yous" so yes you did erotica with heart. That is very good.

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  • From ANON - mike on January 14, 2005
    This is really good...it has the plot laid down very nicely so its hard to lose focus of what going on! i like the use of first person because it gave the readers a better idea of what was going on in beast boys head. good job!
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  • From BrianChattillon on January 14, 2005
    A beautiful evocotive and enigmatic tribute to the two in question, it brought a tear to my eye indeed, you have some tallent with this fic, pity it is a one shot though, not meaning to sound ungratefull but the way it was presented ,to my mind sceams of a long series fiction

    Congratulations
    BrianDarksoul~
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  • From artemisgirl on January 13, 2005
    Nice story. The repitition gave it a lyrical quality. Well done. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - CitrusWarning on January 12, 2005
    :D!!! I LOVE IT! ^^; For your first fic, it was very very.... good doesn't describe it- Keep up the good work!! :)
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