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Reviews for Cleaning Up

By : chaos666
  • From DanielDentis on August 04, 2007
    HEY ,A CHANGLING IS A PERSON THAT CAN TURN INTO ANIMALS ,AND ALSO MAN I GIVE THE STORY A FREAK'N 1000,OOOO,0000
    ,0000 ,0000 TO A BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIG 10!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mustang on July 23, 2006
    i no im stalking you lol BUT this has been bothering me WTF IS A CHANGELING??? is that really what beast boy is????
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  • From ANON - Mustang on July 23, 2006
    WTF y did you end it for real it was good! and i havent wrote a lemon yet lol just some other crap i got dis story Painful reminder if u wanna look but yo i literally laughed out loud when you said beast boy drooled more than mad mods hypno screen thingys

    good job :)
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  • From ANON - b on September 06, 2005
    add more i like it
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  • From ANON - MadMagnum on August 02, 2005
    Even though I'm not really a Terra fan I still liked this.
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  • From EatNYu on July 31, 2005
    MOAR DAMNIT! DO I HAVE TO LOCK YOU IN MY CLOSET TO MAKE YOU WRITE?!?!?!?!? I SAID WRITE MOAR!!!!!! IMMEDIATLY IF NOT SOONER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 out of 10.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2005
    pretty godd but it could have been more discriptive but on a scale of 1-10 i would give it an 8.5 good shit.
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  • From ANON - XXXholic on July 05, 2005
    Very good! Two things to think about for a future; a little more detail would have been nice, and it could have been a bit longer. Other then that, nice work.
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  • From ANON - bloodrain on June 26, 2005
    good but you should have them both have his kid
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  • From ANON - Jebus on March 15, 2005
    Well, it seems that the others hit the short nail on the head, so here's my two cents on a different topic. Detail; it is your freind, feel free to use it. Describing the enviroment, thier mindsets, stuff like that will do two things; first) it helps make a better visual, and second) it adds that precious length. A depth of detail makes up for pages of filler anyway. In fact with the right details your story can be shorter, but filling. Email me if you continue writing and need help chewin stuff...I mean...revising stories before they hit the stands.

    Ja Ne
    Jebus
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  • From ANON - SOME GUY on March 06, 2005
    Good but could be longer.Still its good.
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  • From ANON - Jason on March 03, 2005
    curse my minds eye, curse it to hell!!!!! no, really funny story, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Stryke on July 14, 2004
    it was a really good story--my only complaint was that it wasa little on the short side. but hey, a few new chapters would remedy this, so pls update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2004
    It really needs something that has the two girls goiging at it while they were fucking beast boy.
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  • From on March 10, 2004
    yeah, I remember reading this at FF.net. BUt it was obvious they'd take it down. Now that it's in it's rightful home, that's nice. I gave you 5/5
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