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Reviews for At Last

By : Gethsemane
  • From cheanerochefort on October 20, 2010
    i loved the first chapter was really sweet. the second chapter was hot.
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  • From EvaBrick on June 07, 2009
    I love this story; I come back to read it every now and then.
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  • From FenrisKnight on August 07, 2008
    Might be a little late to the party here, but just read it...and wow. Amazing writing. Really. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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  • From EvaBrick on March 03, 2007
    Awesome story!
    You should write another! :)
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  • From ANON - iheartjug on November 03, 2006
    aww great story! i just wished it was longer! maybe a sequel? such as the reaction at the reunion of them going together?? hmm hmm? anyway great story! i loooove betty and jug fics!!
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  • From ANON - annes on October 29, 2006
    aww i loooove this story even though it was super short. please write more!!!
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  • From ANON - CeeCee on July 09, 2006
    I enjoyed this because I am a longtime Archie fan, and I never thought of Betty and Jughead together, except in a random kind of way, in friendship fics.

    But this was good. I would have liked the love scene to include a little bit more of what each of them loved about the other, and a teeny bit of pillow talk afterward, but other than that, it was great. Got any more stories?
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  • From ANON - lemon_ice on December 23, 2005
    this was resally really really really really really really realy really really reall yreally really really really REALLY! good! i do wish that the sex part was just a little more romantic though.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 19, 2005
    ok, i really really unbelievably liked the beginning of your story. its jsut that i think that hte end should have been more romantic, and not so 'hot' the beginning was so good, i cant evn say in words, and i was thrilled to read it, but then you kind of trailed of al ittle, and i thinkt hat you should have made it much more, as i said romatic...teender, and love...filled? thats just the way it seemed to me that you had started out, but then you went the sex route instead of hte love-making route (yes, theres a difference!!) i would absolutley love you if you fixed the end to make it more romantic, because i really really realy really really really really liked the beginning soo sooooo sooooooo soooooooooo soooooooooo much!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - fuzzy pipe cleaner on November 21, 2005
    That was really sweet. Loved Jughead and Betty but never imagined them together. Thanks for the story. :)
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  • From sexyheart on September 23, 2005
    That was really good.
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  • From ANON - amayakimiwari on September 21, 2005
    i've been waiting for so long for this exact fic. I love it. Jughead and Betty should end up together. you're awesome!
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  • From ANON - Greg on August 27, 2005
    Good story though I wish it was a bit longer
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  • From ANON - Vero on June 21, 2005
    GOOD story! I'd like to see more Archie fanfics like this out there.
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  • From on March 28, 2005
    fabulous! give us more!
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